I feel this elevator pitch was much better than my previous one as my last pitch was a Frankenstein of a production as I tried to piece together a usage take. I tried to have a little bit more fun with my elevator pitch. One of the biggest improvements overall compared to my previous three attempts is the sound of my voice as I am more confident in what I am selling and more comfortable being in front of a camera. Some feedback I received previously was the fact that I would stumble on my words and some of my words would be mumbled/inaudible. I really enjoyed this take as I was able to express myself the most and I had a lot of fun recording this.
It's crazy what a difference confidence can make for a person's tone/level. Being confident and relaxed is key, and it's good to hear you're working on it and I have no doubt you'll get more comfortable with pitching yourself and navigating business situations.
ReplyDeleteReally awesome job! I watched your last elevator pitch as well and I agree that you are sounding more confident and comfortable. You explained your idea very clearly in a way that anyone could understand, and you did it in a way that made it sound interesting and appealing. Your demeanor is friendly and I would definitely want to know more if I heard your elevator pitch!
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